Let Your Mercy Fall on Me

FIC/LINK: Let Your Mercy Fall on Me

AUTHOR: Robicorn

HOW THE AUTHOR DESCRIBES IT: What happens when Bella moves to the Bible belt, and meets Edward, the hot youth group leader of the church she attends? Will she corrupt and turn the virgin musician against his vows? Will Edward fall from grace? Or will Bella be his saving grace?

HOW I DESCRIBE IT: Flaky Renee has found her newest phase…religion. She moves her family to Indiana and is engrossed in the religious scene. She forces her wild daughter, Bella, to attend church where she meets Edward. He is the youth group leader and doesn’t believe in sex before marriage let alone dating a 16yr old when he’s 22. But the two decide to keep the relationship ‘private’ but secrets inevitably come out. The two must navigate society, what is seen as good and evil and their own selves.

CHAPT THAT WILL SUCK YOU IN: Chapter 2:What a Wonderful Maker – Bella and her best friend/fuck buddy Jasper in a church together = trouble! Add Edward to the mix and this triangle gets interesting!

CHAPT THAT IS EPIC: I have to tie this one… Chapter 29: Losing My Religion and Chapter 30: Stand in the Rain – The chapters flow into one another and its when everything just…HAPPENS! I cant spoil it!! But its honestly drama that is equivalent to events in New Moon!!

FINAL THOUGHT: At first I thought this was going to be some typical fic about Slutella seducing the innocent Bible-boyward. But boy was I wrong!! It has so much depth to it and the use of religion did not phase me at all(seeing how im not religious at all!). The author writes the sweetest lines that are worthy of being in Hallmark cards. The angst in this is so damn good! No fic has broken my heart as much as reading NM did but this one was at NM-cry-worthy levels! Its at 38 chapters and almost complete! The last ten chapters have been phenomenal!!! and the final ones are set to be EPIC if the teaser i just got in an indication! I cannot say any more good things besides this without spoiling all the unexpected turns so GO READ IT!! (then tweet me to discuss!!)