FIC/LINK: Untouched
AUTHOR:TheNomadSoulmate
HOW THE AUTHOR DESCRIBES IT: Hello. I'm Bella Swan, and i hate men. You didn't really think i'd just be 'dazzled' by you, did you? Oh, honey. I'm smarter than that."
HOW THE AUTHOR DESCRIBES IT: Hello. I'm Bella Swan, and i hate men. You didn't really think i'd just be 'dazzled' by you, did you? Oh, honey. I'm smarter than that."
HOW I DESCRIBE IT: Bella moves in with Alice and Alice's cousin, Edward, whom she hates. The two clash at the beginning but begin to bond over giving each other lessons...
CHAPT THAT WILL SUCK YOU IN: Chapter 3 - Feminist. OMG! E and B hate each other and its so funny to see how they interact! The sarcasm is too funny! and I love no BS Bella!
CHAPT THAT IS EPIC: Chapter 28 - Love. Well the title kinda says it all....but if you read it.....you will know why else its epic.
FINAL THOUGHT: So this hasnt updated in a while and i kind of forgot the plot so i had to go back a skim through it. But now that I remember it...my god it was a good one! So the author is only 17...but she can write smut like no other! Damn! The chapters aren't too long but they are really good!
3 comments:
I started this a few months back and instantly loved the banter between Edward and Bella from the get-go.
Bella hates men - period, and has definite daddy issues. Jake cheated on her with her best friend, and Charlie left her mother when Bella was just three.
Edward also has his own issues. He is dealing with the impact the loss of his father has had on both himself and his mother. There is a lot of guilt and anger bubbling under the surface.
These two clash from the very start, making judgements that are both hurtful and rash, and bring up topics they would rather not discuss.
They gradually begin to understand each other and form a friendship that is filled with sexual tension. They each give each other a first; Bella gives Edward a cigarette, and Edward gives Bella head - she definitely got the better end of the deal. Their feelings grow, both having to deal with their pasts to move forward.
The chapters in this story are short, so it won't take you anytime at all to read and catch up. There are some really good aspects to this story, and it may not be the best fic out there but it's definitely worth a read in my opinion.
hey!! :) Never read this before.. Will go check it out!! <3
thanks Jess! :)
oh thanks, I love fics that Bella and Edward hate each other at first, it adds so much more to the tension!
I'll check it out!
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