Fourteen


FIC/LINK: Fourteen

AUTHOR: Crimsonmarie


HOW THE AUTHOR DESCRIBES IT:High school is brutal. It's even worse when you're not a size two. Worse than that? Having a major crush on the biggest, hottest jerk in high
school. Even worse than that? Being paired up with him for a science project.


HOW I DESCRIBE IT: It another one where Edward is the hot popular guy of the school (lets face it, who doesnt like this Edward) and Bella is the social outcast. In this fic its because she is deemed 'overweight' where shes a size 14. Having being paired as Lab partners they are forced to spend a lot of time together but just because they're forced together doesnt mean the chemistry is forced too. Now the two have to navigate the dramas of high school to be together.

CHAPT THAT WILL SUCK YOU IN: Chapter 4 - Bella and Edward have a private chat but not before the WHOLE school realizes that the school Prince has gone off with the ugly duckling of the school. Tongues go-a-wagging as everyone pounces on the newest scandal at school.

CHAPT THAT IS EPIC: Chapter 9 - Shit hits the fan and poor Edward doesnt know what hit him in the face!

FINAL THOUGHT: This is a super short fic finishing with a total on 14 chapters. Which includes a really good Epi and a few outtakes to come. Its a real nice one to read through quickly as it wont do your head in as you try to figure out the plot.

1 comments:

Kim1524 said...

This story is okay for what it is. The subject matter at hand is something I had yet to read and that in itself was intriguing.

Bella is a size fourteen and has fallen for Edward who just happens to be Mr popular and a bit of a dick.

Bella is bullied for her size by a lot of the kids at school - including Edward - and the only people who really speak to her are Angela and her boyfriend Ben.

Her life at home is lonely; her father not paying attention to her or seemingly caring what she does.

They both come together after being paired for a school project. Edward ends up physically hurting Bella by grabbing her wrist too hard and this sets off unease within himself. They gradually become friends and then eventually more while having to deal with outside views.

I really enjoyed the first few chapters and I liked the eiplogue itself, but some bits were a little too repetitive for me. It's not at all badly written just not one of my favourites.