A Rough Start


FIC/LINK: A Rough Start

AUTHOR: ItzMegan73

HOW THE AUTHOR DESCRIBES IT:Overnight irresponsible Edward goes from bachelor to father of a 5 yr old. Meanwhile responsible, prepared Bella begins her first job as Kindergarten teacher at Forks Elementary. When irresponsible meets the epitome of responsible, sparks will fly!

HOW I DESCRIBE IT: Edward is a bachelor struggling with living from paycheck to paycheck. He leads a dismal life alone. That is until one day, a social worker drops his son off on his door step. A son he never knew existed and a son who had nothing left but him. Both struggle to get to know each other and make ends meet. But with the help of his son's teacher, Ms Bella Swan, Edward realizes that maybe life didn't have to be so bad?

CHAPT THAT WILL SUCK YOU IN: Chapter 3: Under Pressure - The weight of everything that has suddenly happened to Edward takes its toll and there is a case of mistaken identity that just causes a bit of a problem....

CHAPT THAT IS EPIC: Chapter 15: Maneater - Something happens to Edward son and this begins a motion of events that will inevitably bring Bella and Edward closer together.


FINAL THOUGHT: The beginning of this FF is so depressing! I was always so used to Edward being a rich character, so to see him struggling and his strained relationship with his son was heart breaking. You really feel for Bella in this story too. She is so kind hearted but there a fiery bitch inside of her as well. This is a really good fic describing the struggles of life and shows how the generosity of one single person can go a long way.

2 comments:

Leydy said...

awww im really glad you like this ff... this is one of the ffs i adore... Every time is see her update I JUMP U N DOWN! love it!

Unknown said...

I love love love this ff and squeal with every update! The author does an amazing job showing Edward's struggles through surprise parenthood!